Thursday, June 1, 2017

WORK CITED

WORK CITED
Fitzgerald, F. Scott. The Great Gatsby. London: Penguin, 2000. Print.
Bradbury, Ray. Fahrenheit 451: The Temperature at Which Book Paper Catches Fire, and Burns ... New York: Ballantine, 1953. Print.
Preston, Dr. "Dr. Preston's American Literature 2016-2017." Dr. Preston's American Literature 2016-2017. N.p., 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 01 June 2017.
Arlington Robinson, Edwin “Richard Cory” Children of the night 1897


MASTERPIECE ACADEMY PAPER

Richard Kern
Dr. Preston
English 3
June 2, 2017
A Look Back
A Reflection of this year
                Have you ever looked back and asked yourself if you could have done something better? This year in English Class has been a very interesting and surprisingly very enjoyable one. This year has had its ups and downs but for the most part this was a big year for me to grown and learn into what I am at the end of the year. I have learned a lot and have been given a lot of information that I really haven’t taken advantage of even though I should have. There is going to be 7 elements of that things that we talked about spread throughout this essay about the things that happened and the things that I have personally learned about this year in my English class.
            This year in class was all about communication and learning to trust one another in a new way. We have been treated as colleagues and had some very big choices in the way that we learned and the way the course was even being taught. Also, we have been given such an important level of trust. I feel that at times we really deserve the trust but sometimes we just abused this power and just didn’t do the work that we were supposed to. Some people had this trust all year but some lost it. I feel that we all earned it but sometimes we really didn’t honor it. Sometimes we are giving a certain amount of trust and we either keep it or lose it no matter what.
            The characters that we were reading about felt real even though they were fiction but some felt real. “The lie that tells the truth” is a perfect way to describe some of the characters such as Montag who realized that technology can make people blind to emotion and feelings. The Great Gatsby by F Scott Fitzgerald is a novel that shows many various parts of society like the rich but the miserable, Gatsby, or the pretend that everything in the world is positive even though you are sad, Daisy. I feel that Montag kind of showed a part me because I can see that everyone loves and pays more attention to their phone more than their friends. Richard Cory was also a character that is very like how I am in the way that he keeps things to himself and doesn’t really need to show a lot to people. The way that the authors of these books and poems used diction and syntax was so well because it made the characters on paper feel so real and genuine. Sometimes I feel that through books and movies we can find ourselves in characters that are just made up.
            Sometimes things that we love or find enjoyable can be forgotten but then brought back better than ever and predictions can be so scary that they become reality. This year I have been going back to listening to music a lot because in 7th and 8th grade I would always have my iPod on but freshman and sophomore year I didn’t really listen to music I just started to just leave my phone home and throw away my headphones. One of the things that made really laugh was that the events that were happening in the book Fahrenheit 451 were starting to happen in our real time and the book was already old so the author Ray Bradbury was able to predict such thing is crazy and really funny if you think about it. The fact that something from a sci fi book can start to happen is crazy.
            There are many ways and things to teach but sometimes people think alike and can create something different and be so similar. In the masterpiece academy presentations, many people went but some of them could be considered similar such as Adrian and Elias’s presentations were similar because of the way they talked in front of the class and the topics of not really giving up on your goals and sticking to them. Another similar presentation was Alex and Luis’s because they both talked about clothes and both showed examples of different websites that you could go to start your own type of business. I also felt that Jaime’s presentation about lasagna was like Isaias’s presentation about makeup more because of the way they were presented in seeing the steps and then the final product. I feel that my own presentation on the impact of music was like Victor’s presentation on religion because I let the music play to show my message while he read exerts from the various books to explain his message. A lot of the presentations were similar in the sense that they would talk for a little big and then play a video. Also, Satchel and Angle’s presentations were similar because they both had riddles in them. Ever though you can see similarities these presentations were good and different.
            In life, we must go through things that almost feel like a fairy tale and we are either the hero or the villain. I don’t really know if I am the hero because I think that there was room for improvement many times but I never took any chances or tried anything different but maybe. I feel that I tried every time that we had to do something I didn’t really want to be the minimum I want to kind of go beyond. I never really found a mentor but there is always people who inspire me and I feel that this class has helped me conquer the challenge of being quiet because I started to talk a lot more even with my friends even though most of the time I am the quiet one. Sometimes the things that seem the hardest can be the easiest if you practice and find something that inspires you to try harder.
            This year was fun because of the way that Dr. Preston made and structured this course. This course required so much trusted between the students and the teacher that for some could seem that it was too much freedom and a bad idea which sometimes it was but most of the time it was fine. We, the students, at times had to do things that were out of our comfort zone and speak up even if we didn’t want we just had to. This course also made me think that working as a team could help whenever than just thinking by yourself. This course at times was really frustrating and at time boring but the times that were exciting and extremely special made all of the bad things go away this course is very special and I am extremely grateful for having the teacher that I had and the classmates that I had because everyone in that room made it special.




Wednesday, May 31, 2017

Today's presentations

#1 the first presentation was on tradition Mexican dances
There are different types of dances
Each dance tells a different story
All of the stories are very different
there is so much that you need to know about the dances and how to do them

#2 The second presentation is about bringing the open source learning that we have in this class to mexico
there are teachers in mexico who are trying to do something similar but with younger kids
In india it has been proven that they could learn so much through a tablet
In mexico there is already 2 different types of learning systems

#3 The third presentation was about cutting hair
this presentation showed step by step on how to do a shadow fade
the cool this was that Chris wanted to keep doing it because he thought it was fun

Sunday, April 30, 2017

WE EAT SOCIAL MEDIA FOR BREAKFAST

    Do you every think that posting a picture is dumb or do you do just cause? In this essay we get the opinion from Dr.Preston about us just using social media to post about dumb things then actually using it to communicate and talk to each other. Taking the example of people just posting their meals other that actually sitting down and enjoying and using it to show us that we live in a world where people don't really communicate but just message and send pictures to instead of doing things in the real world. While some people say that they do not use social media that is kinda of a lie because everyone does but some are just on it for no reason just cause everyone else is. In this essay we will be analyzing the diction, syntax, tone, and rhetorical strategies that the author used.

   In this paragraph we will be analyzing the authors use of diction and syntax. The author arranges the words in such a way that everything is in a spot that make so much sense and so every thing is flowing very well and all makes sense. The author's use of diction is very good because he uses simple words and doesn't over complicate anything and make it easy for the reader to understand and to read.These words are arranged so well that it feels really good to actually sit down and read this essay and it also doesn't use big words to confuse the readers. The author's use of diction and syntax is really good and helps make the essay even better.

   Next we are going to be talking about the author's tone towards the readers and towards the topic. We can see that the author has found something in the world that he feels isn't very good because he shows through his words that he would much prefer a face to face conversation over some texts back and forth. The author thinks that people are using social media in the wrong way and are using it for reasons like posting a picture of their food instead of actually using it to communicate with other people and interacting for work. The author's tone towards this subject is almost confused or concerned because social media is taking over people's lives. Now we are going to see the author's rhetorical strategies that are used in his essay.

    The author's use of rhetorical strategies is so good. The author compares posting a picture to Instagram or Snapchat to going to a store and giving them the film to then develop the pictures. He states that there is no use of film anymore and that everyone just has it backed up onto their phones and that there was some sort of magic to getting a physical copy of a picture other than seeing it on our phone or anything else. The way we got pictures before social media and now are extremely different because we had to go out and buy film but now we can take 100 pictures in a couple of seconds and they are sometimes not even that special anymore. The author uses these rhetorical strategies to show his point that social media has made people not really find any special things in pictures and communicating with others.

    The author has a very special way of using diction,syntax,tone, and rhetorical strategies  The diction and syntax is used very well that the readers do not get lost and confused. The author's tone towards the topic is very concerned that people who are using social media will loss the way they talk with people in the real world and just talk to people on social media platforms. He uses rhetorical strategies to show that there are some importance in the old ways of doing things in this world instead of just posting a picture of our breakfast and hoping some will see it. The author uses there strategies in great ways to make his point more relevant in a world where every one is consumed by social media.

Sunday, April 23, 2017

EXPERIENCE #3

i had an idea that for my little cousins that in one of the eggs that they would get for Easter I would put one just like some rocks in it but I thought about it and said it i was little and got an egg with rocks in it I would be so pissed so I just said what ever and put candy onstead

EXPERIENCE #2

during spring break I had a bad thing happen and that was that my dog passed away and for me that thing was everything and having to go through that was something that almost felt unreal and the fact that I didn't really feel that same was hard to get over but in the end I had to get over it and try to figure out what happens in the future

EXPERIENCE #1

over the spring break the guitar orchestra had a trip and we had to wake up way too early so I woke up an hour and a half before we left at 6:15 and so I thought that if i get there to early it would be weird and if I get there to late then the bus would be gone so this experience helped me improve my time management skills.